Summary of our story, difficulty that i've had 11/02/13

Hello everybody, 

Today we begun our story, the communication and the collaboration between us was good. We have succeed to find a good idea in few time.

What do you think about our communication and our collaboration?

Summary of our story:

Narrative: third person
Topic = friendship
Moral = fight against racism

Main characters:
- 1 little brown bear (boy) called Teddy
- 1 little white bear (girl) called Lucy
- 1 little panda (boy) called Romeo

Story: White and brown bears live together in mountains, the top is icy and it's also a place where there is grass on the ground. One day, a panda, Romeo, arrived and nobody know where he comes from. He's not like others, and because of his difference, he's rejected. But Lucy and Teddy decide to be nice and stay with him.
At the end, everybody are together and happy.

PS: Not use the word racism in the story.

One difficulty for me: Difficulty to connect at this blog but with help of my group, it has been resolved.

I think i didn't write everything, so you can create another article or comment to complete what i've already said.

What is your impression about our idea, our story?

I think, for next time, we have to think a bit more of details of our story, to be able to exchange on that in course without waste time.

See you in course!